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I am a writer
I write what
I wish I could say
Trapping my feelings
On paper everyday

I am a writer
I write what
I see around me
My eyes; wide open
Have set me free

I am a writer
I write what
I need to do
Clear and confused
Just give me a clue

I am a writer
I write what I feel
And I feel what I write
But when I stop feeling
I stop writing
And my little world
Starts reeling

I am a writer
Who writes to find reason
And maybe even some treason
In this world
Where insanity rules
Behind a piece of paper marked:
"Here are the fools"
Wow it has been awhile since I've posted anything...  Sorry guys, but I've been at a loss for words lately and then I had writer's block.  I think I'm good now so have this lil poem c:
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Pucca2000 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Simply lovely, your poem is. 
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks buddy :)
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Pucca2000 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're quite welcome. 
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Precipitous120 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Listen here fello, your breaking in on my terf, I've claimed this plot already... If I sniff any more of this art again, there is going to be trouble, you can't escape.

I like it, even though it's meaningless

The very last part I like the best... if the rest of it could be as good... Damn that would be a piece
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Listen here bucko, you have no right to claim plots or whatever. Don't comment on my art if you're gonna say it's meaningless.
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Precipitous120 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
LOL man that first part was just a joke... Your work is good... but I mainly like the end... the start kinda bores me
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Those kinda jokes don't fly with me kid.
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Precipitous120 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Stop licking my face... AAAAAAGHAGAHAGH ! I'm clean I'm clean... what are you a cat or a Licking Daemon!!!!

LOL, you are so cool man
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's lugia.
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Precipitous120 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Awe!!! Shame I Didn't know you had a cold!!!  

Let me get you to a vet... they will know what to do 
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What.
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BlueMeetsBlack Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like you, I like you so much...I like you ALOOOOOT...Please Marry me, my number is 555 love me lots 6
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol wut
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taken4granted07 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i just love this.
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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anamiagirl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your style of writing, and i love what you write. 
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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Guitarmstrsid7 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Quite enjoyed that, thank you for sharing :)
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No, thank you for reading :D
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ThyneOwnSlave Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Professional General Artist

This is so incredibly perfect. Except the credibility is completely 110% there, because writers always know what they're talking about. :nod:

 

No, I'm not being sarcastic. I just wanted to clarify that.

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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and yes that's true :XD:
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DarkDelusion Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Beautiful, simply beautiful
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! It means a lot :meow:
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MikeLeeDomk Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
I like it.

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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks buddy
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MikeLeeDomk Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Your welcome.
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MiiAina Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow! i can relate to this :)
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That was my main focus :XD:
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MiiAina Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you managed that well :D
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks bud ;)
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Charliesan Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014   General Artist
Nice, I feel emphatetic with a lot of things in this poem :)
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol that was what I was tryna get at:)
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Zark123 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Writer
Well written. I find your subject matter largely empathetic to condition of writing, which is a mindset which spurs the pen into action and makes one a writer. It is of my opinion, however, that your writing can develop better by not relying on rhyme, its simplicity is what highlights its quality. For example, rhymes like 'feeling' with 'reeling' have been exhausted with overuse and now can almost be predicted by the cognition of poetic anticipation. I particularly love the conclusion your poem has - it speaks worlds about the self and the social treatment of the individual who dares to indulge in the art of wordsmithing.
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and yeah I know. Rhyme was just somethin' I threw in to make it flow a little better. I wanna try usin' some other devices like alliteration. But over all thnk you :).
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BethanyyJoelle Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful. And super relate-able. Is that a word? anyways :P I love how you even included how it sets you free and yet traps you at the same time. Good job:] 
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks pal, that's what I was goin' for :D
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BethanyyJoelle Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Writer
Good! You're welcome:] 
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Nice poem, it really shows how we writers think.
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks pal ;)
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You're welcome, buddy :)
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Ice-Cove27 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this a lot. ^^ to me...writers are a people of change. I write about what I wish I could live...or be like or see. It's a different world for me to escape to :D
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And the great thing about writing is that it's different for everyone :meow:
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Ice-Cove27 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very true! Definitely. ^^
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AngelaJenkinson Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So true and well captured :)
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samsamsammysam66 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thanks bud ;)
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AngelaJenkinson Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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